Last week didn't go quite as smoothly as I had hoped, but this all part of a learning curve. Onwards and upwards with every week.
Fortunately my imagery seems to be congealing, its just a matter of narrowing down the message a bit. So thats what I did.
I took some feedback from Nancy and changed how I was presenting myself, taking her words and changing them a bit so I wasn't using them verbatim, cause that would be a bit lazy.
So here we are this week, with new changes in place:
Here, we see I removed the logo. It was mentioned that the personal branding might be a hindrance, so it's gone, leaving my "tagline" as the sole content of the cover.
Wording here was changed a bit here, message brought more inline with Nancy's suggestion.
I made two new slides with two more multitools with a simple message on each "blade" each short message image reinforcing how much I can do, and in different "environments". The axe represents a different environment than the USB adapter and suggests different functions in different environments and requirements.
One last "multitool" and a last little jab reflecting my sense of humour, contrasting the white trash, greasy fast food association of the cheap plastic silly disposable spork against the line that I'm a sophisticated individual. Wording on the final "blade" was changed to be more inline with Nancy's suggestion of pushing a unified message.
Back cover, nothing to see here.
I did add my tagline and phone number to the bottom of the poster in order to unify my message and keep drumming my contact information into the audiences head.
This weekend I will finally be sourcing photographs of my own nail in order to finally get rid of this pixellated mess that I've been using for the last few weeks. I've got a couple concepts to chase for the nail, but the overall layout of the poster won't be changing.
Tune in next week, where you just might see this thing assembled! I'm kinda excited.






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