Group Feedback

After presenting my project to numerous individuals and getting reams of feedback, here is what I managed to take home from todays event.

Robert:
• play with tagline and sizing, make it less wordy.

Jordy:
• make approach more "viral" brand all things that could be handed out during frosh week. T-Shirts, water bottles, pencils, all of the things that will put the site in the hands of students instead of having them come to the site.
• more solution based imagery, instead of having the students depicted floundering in their situation have them enacting their solutions.

Terrance:
• make a shorter URL its too many letters.
• have a call to action instead of a question.

Richard:
• less sales brochure look to project, use more cliched imagery. people identify with cliches more.
• too cluttered, less wordy.

Iris:
• make layout warmer, more hand drawn elements.
• make logo look less like a piece of candy
• hand lettering, illustrated layout.
• she doesn't like the big void on the left side of my poster.