1st poster concept:
• layout of this one works best
• placeholder text left in was not received well by viewers... lesson learned. "trade practices" will and can confuse those who don't know our process.
• Mind over MATER play on words completely overshot audience.
• Student looks sufficiently stressed, Imagery is successful.
• QR codes too big
2nd Poster Concept:
• Tilted image not well received. More comments about placeholder text being misunderstood.
Sticker Concept:
• Image needs more desperation in body language of model.
• Work with hierarchy, and play with positioning of text.
Website Splash Page:
• Simplicity is functional, but I didn't clearly label image as web page caused some confusion.
• Logo needs work, lost in negative space.
• Colors too drab.
Website login page:
• More confusion about logo, hard to read, lost in negative space.
• Compliments on choice of font, but suggestions to keep it just to headings.
• Chalkboard idea is executed clearly, but questions maturity level.
Website "forum" Page:
• Lots of confusion as to purpose of this page, discussion area? Just for venting?
• Change colors of speech bubbles to accentuate back and forth of conversation.
Coasters:
• Solid concept, blue should be continued on website.
• QR code should be smaller.
• Body language of model should be changed to reflect more desperation.
• Logo getting lost in negative space. Confusion of what logo actually is.
Changes to be made:
• abandon mind over mater concept. Think up new URL/Name.
• change sizing of QR codes across all items, go to absolute minimum sizing on 1.2"
• abandon second concept for poster with tilted imagery.
• have to reshoot Jeremy in classroom at later date to express more desperation in second image used on sticker.
• Rework logo so it isn't so abstracted.
• bring colours/masking tape concept into coasters and website
• brighter more vibrant colors on website.
• redesign website concept, abandon blackboard idea.
• website concept needs more attention, granted it has been last priority so it will get better over time.
• work on overall unity of all items. incorporate colors, concept and imagery universally.
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